Now that I’ve eliminated my intrusive voice, coaxed the plots and subplots to play nicely together, gotten control of pacing, and overcome my hesitance with love scenes, it’s time to complete the set of revision artifacts (outline and scene notes) for moving the plots toward their climaxes. I was very excited about getting to this point – until I saw that I have to say goodbye. Bid farewell to the pieces of story that don’t belong.
It barely matters how much I love them. It matters less that they’re witty conversations, scenes of poignant character bonding, or beautifully detailed descriptions. These snippets aren’t like the long stretch of exposition I got rid of earlier. Putting that on the chopping block was easy. These are little islands of artfulness that I had thought would make interesting reading. I am reluctant to pick up the red pen and eliminate them. But no matter how long I procrastinate, whine, or otherwise behave badly; they have to be cut. Maybe I’ll get a chance to use them in other stories, but they have to come out of this one.
Having learned that timing is everything, I now easily see that these showy bits of fluff are mucking it up. They’re too costly – slowing down and confusing the story; sabotaging my ability to sustain tension and suspense. Packed into the next forty eight hours of the escalating action plot are several loud arguments, at least two fights and a murder. I really love the sweeping panoramic description of Skye Pointe, but no time for it. Gone. Then there’s the scene showcasing the research I’d done on six-man yachting. I am extremely proud of it, but the action has to keep moving. It’s out. Ditto for the beautifully detailed description of the hero’s family estate. Doesn’t really fit in the middle of a fight. Axed. Next up is the trip to the museum. Wait a minute… That’s important to the story line. Have to keep that one!
- Goal 1: From Chapter 14, both plots begin the spiral up to their climaxes. I had to make some adjustments to focus them. In spite of the scene cutting I did, I ended up with an additional chapter. So even though I finished Chapter 14, there are still 6 more to go! Crazy that I cut scenes and end up with more…
- Goal 2: There were only 3 days that I was able to spend 3 hours. I only managed an hour here and there the other 4 days. I need to do better this week.
- Goal 3 -Still posting!
Hope everyone is having a better time of it.